高一考试英语作文,希望有英语老师评个分?
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时间：2023-10-13 12:02
不是英语老师。这里高三，但是我想提提建议吧
也是实验班的学生，平时英语作文大多20分左右，按我们老师对我们的要求的话，这个作文的字数不太够，建议再加点内容扩写补充。另外注意书写，尽量不要填笔，写错了直接一杠杠掉比较好追问好的明白了，谢谢
热心网友
时间：2023-10-13 12:02
严格点来说，语法错误有点多，书法不太好看，文章还算工整，打分的话15分左右
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